Interesting approach to the drones and the concept, but at the one minute mark my brain is starting to look for something to hold onto melodically and some variation. The drone sustained intensity and qualities are detrimental to the listening experience, as they take most of the attention space. At around 2:11 there's some harmonic variation in the bass, but I felt the piece would have improved if it appeared earlier. The drone continuity makes the piece a tad oppressive and difficult to get to the end without feeling somewhat tired.
Ratings:
Execution: 3
Vibe: 3
Composition: 3
Listenability: 2
Correlation to theme: 2
Rating criteria: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LEz4pyyHR7iQ75W2IFjA22odaeDNmdm-/view?usp=drive...