Great Job! I thought it really felt natural to the theme and especially the video it's presented with. 1:45+ was a highlight for me. I think it really ratcheted up the tension and took it from exposition into drama. A lot of good flair from the high strings and ambient noises. The sub was definitely popping out, which may have been a choice to balance how it sounds across different systems or just artistic preference, but as a listener without context to the decision I thought could be dialed back a little. I enjoyed the submission overall and I could definitely see this fitting in a movie opening!
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Thank you so much! Glad to hear it worked for you. ^^ And I take note of the sub popping out! It was a deliberate choice to make them powerful to compensate for the constant more shrill high strings and fill the low-end with some "paranormal" really deep and resonating bass stuff, but I only checked this in headphones, so it might indeed be too upfront.