Despite being unfinished, this was still a good story with interesting characters and an intriguing mystery, as I would expect from you. I would very much enjoy seeing the full version if you decide to finish it, (though I have enough of my own complicated, unfinished jam submissions to know that doesn't always happen). My one suggestion is to show the characters' names when they speak, since I had a hard time keeping track of who was was who. Also, add a thumbnail and description to the game page - this is a worthy game <3
Glad you were able to participate this jam :)