This is a really nice track, I love the mallet percussion/bell use. It reminds me a bit of interlocking patterns in gamelan music.
My main advice though would be to pay attention to dynamics. Especially in the middle section, around 1:08-2:00, I felt like you wanted to build up something there, but the volume and overall intensity stayed the same throughout. It would have been better to slowly build the dynamics of the instruments up or bring in a bit more instruments to make it a bit more intense.
Other than that it's a very solid entry!