Track 1 was nice, but it felt a bit conservative. I think the main issue I have is with the water sound effects (what I assume to be rowing the boat) seemed a bit overdone, it may be best to have it just be the instruments once in a while as it feels like the sound effects are a bit too prominent and don't really allow the instruments to "breathe" so to speak.
Track 2 has a lot of passionate energy. It serves as a nice contrast to track one. I think it would've benefitted a bit from some really low drone tones. like I know you have some going on, but i mean even lower pitched than that. it would add a bit of weight / foundation to what you already have going on top.
Overall though I appreciate the recording and mixing quality and for being bold in the second piece. A solid entry for sure.