I quite enjoyed your game.
I really liked the artstyle, was giving me big "bag inside a bag of milk" vibes... when it was there. I think it goes too long with just text and only sheeps (sheep is cute though) and i quickly started cheering the fly to wake the character up. And I'm sorry for saying this, as it looks like insomnia here is something you understand sadly too well, but character pulling out a gun on a fly was hilarious.
For other nitpicks, first dialogue after each sheep-counting was constantly bugging out, turning itself off and then start from the begginning after awhile and English version is somewhat rough (that's of course fine in gamejam project imo and wasn't substracting much from the experience).
Would like to see more (with more art in between mayhaps).
Good luck with finishing chapter 3