That was an amazing experience! I love the people moving in the background as if we were in the carnival itself and the effects such as the cloud in Kalita's tent and Zar's light, it made the whole game feel very atmospheric.

I suggest improvements on the history log. A bit of black stroke around the text would benefit so us players would be able to read the history log better. If not, a dark layer that's a bit translucent over the existing background could help the text's readability.

This was a wonderful experience overall! Thank you for making this game 

I really loved this one! The writing is great, the visuals are stunning and the soundtrack is very fitting. The whole experience is immersive and very fun! One of my favs from this Spooktover Jam so far :3

The only thing I would change is the log/history - it's vaery hard to read due to the hite text on a bright background. 
Congrats to the team!

The story was so good! I enjoyed every moment of this game.

Chat, I don't think we can fix this particular clown >:(

Nevertheless, tremendous work here <3 perfect for Spooktober!

xoxo

Love the character designs, they are thoughtful and imply a connection to a larger world and lore. They are well illustrated and well thought out. Nice sound design too.

I enjoyed the story, and I appreciate that my choices affect the endings and the other character too!

All characters are gorgeous! But their expressions are a bit hard to read, perhaps you can improve it with gesture or poses.

This is just nitpicks, but, it's a bit hard to read the text history, with light background and white text... Maybe  the text color  can be darkened or put thin black stroke. 

Also, it would be cool if we can click objects in Cassian's room, since we can click objects in Rhia's room...

Overall, I  like this VN, good job to the teams!

Love the storytelling!!! Visuals and music are awsome!!! молодці  ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧