For the first track: I really like the instruments, they sound incredibly cool, but sometimes, it feels as if they are overused. In some cases, they kind of blend together and the main progression of the track is built on the use of different instruments, but I would have found it nice if the melody is developed on more, since I really liked the base theme. The second track is just good, with a really interesting vibe. The last track feels a bit dominated by the melody, I think I'd prefer if it was a bit more mixed in with the rest, but the composition was really nice on that one. All around some really nice tracks and some great instruments.
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Thank you for the feedback!
For the 1st Track yeah agreed, although I was trying to go for ambience, so the blending was a bit intentional as I didn't want it to be too distracting, but I see the point is that it could still be a bit more distinct.
For the 3rd track, the melody being a bit more developed was also intentional, as that was part of the lore/writeup as it was a singing performance by a Geisha, not sure if you got a chance to read it up above. (The 2nd track also has some lore above too if you're interested where the vibe came from).