Wasn't a big fan of this. Yes, I recognise this was for a jam so incompletedness can be forgiven. But I don't think the game used it's time well.
The story spends so long on inconsequential things. Like just as a story,I'd say this needs some editing, some fat cut off. It could be nice to slow something down and just play a part in a conversation; I mean we all do this in real life all the time so it adds grounding to the story. But in terms of narrative efficiency- We did not need so much time spent wandering samey alleyways when there was literally zero payoff...
And also as a story, I wasn't a fan of the writing. I 'got the ick' so many times reading this dialogue. And I'm a guy! Like forget about suspending disbelief about weight gain, I had to suspend disbelief that this man has a girlfriend... or even a woman who's okay being his room-mate. Like who the fuck just starts wanking in the shared space lounge room??
I'm not going to give the game much flak for this because I'm all too aware of how easy it is to not be able to fit as much into a game-jam as you want, but there's essentially no fetish content in this as of writing. Like you see an old pic of Gaby, compared to current Gaby, then we're told she's larger when her tits are out of frame so...
Overall, there's an idea that could work here, but ideas are the easy bit. And the work completed here is well, if I were in charge and made this into a full product, this segment likely wouldn't make in the final cut..