I genuinely had a canon blast with this one, loved the characters and the wacky setting that is Torovo!
My only notes are allowing the play to maybe skip to a specific time of day and being able to completely skip repeat dialogue. Maybe some sort of highlight or indication of when you can use one of your pictures to uncover new info would be very useful as well!
I did encounter a couple story breaking bugs:
I spoke to nomad first and protag mentions the guy at the hospital remembering a horse even though I hadn't spoken with him yet.
Then with Kenny's arrest protag calls the voice his dad even though I never got that info. Then everyone continues as if that was common knowledge.
Overall it was a great demo!
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