Very interesting for a demo! I love the presentation of the ui and how the story is played out, it reminds me of one of my fathers audio books he'd listen to. That being said, it is quite long to get to the premise of the story and i was confused at times on what I'm meant to be looking forward to (there wasnt a big hook imo, though I am not fond of sci fi stories usually so it might just be a personal preference), and a big issue is that there isn't much to look at while the narration tells it's story lots of telling but not showing, with your presentation you def can play alot with how u present the story! (also some transitions were a bit jarring but i was playing on the web ver) though i assume you'll def work on the demo more since you had time restraints from the jam.
overall very excited to see it completed and fully polished up!