I have to wonder what other instrument you had at bars 9-12 that you left out that could have helped it build into bar 13 better -- I love the build and the instrumentation there is fantastic, but it jump scared me a little! Otherwise I loved this little piece.

Love the intro here into the vocals build up! Gives me intro vibes. I thinkt that was written in lydian as well, so makes sense. 

The lush chords opening up to that fanfare was a terrific build!