I really liked the art style and the unusual palette that somehow works really well for the game. The plane made me laugh - it haunts me too and I live in a completely different suburb. It also helps, along with the people, to enhance a Cape Townness about this that is so subtle (in a good way) that it probably only resonates with Capetonians but still tells a story for anyone else.
My only complaint is the text, specifically the spelling and punctuation errors. You can fix all of that in five minutes by just copying it into Word (or, better, LibreOffice Writer) and looking for the red squiggles. Please give your text the same amount of care that you give to your narrative!