I both loved this and disliked some of it at the same time. I absolutely LOVED how you used the theme, because the story truly is extremely jumbled up, especially if you don't read everything in the right order. I loved how we don't actually know what's going on, while we're still getting snippets here and there and trying to piece them together. I loved the ending and what it implied. What I disliked was all of the jumping around needed; I felt like some of the passwords really weren't clear until you were given hints on where you need to look. And because there's so many things to read, that can get tedious when you need to look through multiple entries to find exactly what you have to input. That's not on you, but there was one password I NEVER would have been able to guess without a hint. I DO like that there is a hint system, and I like that the game took mercy and did not show me how many times I failed to unlock something at the end. :) Overall, this is a very solid entry. Even with my criticism, I don't think anything needs to be changed. Part of the fun of this WAS the challenge of piecing the story together. I honestly feel like the use of a laptop for the entire story was extremely clever. Well done.