Took me around 30 min to finish this chapter.
The small animations throughout the chapter gives it an extra immersion without being distracting, instead of staring at fixed images you have falling, rain, fog, the fire was one of my favorites along the glowing chimney fire.
I also really liked the sprites moving even if simple side by side, it made it more dynamic, seeing Flynn "run" to one side and the other made me laugh a bit, it helps show a bit more of the characters personalities.
The soundtrack is very well done, both the pauses and changes to back up the mood of the dialoge. It is impressive the amount of art you managed to finish in the jam period, seriously.
The only thing that's a bit hard to judge is the story since it is only the beginning (which is understandable given how fast a month goes by), it is easy to assume both characters are not being fully honest, and there is something there, but aside that I am guessing the fragmentation will be more obvious once there are more chapters.