Hi, thanks you for your review! I will take this in consideration when creating new visual novels ^^
The title was not a direct word to French, but the story was although I did my best to translate it in the English language accurately. I’m sorry for the confusion, I will work more on that! Thank you for taking the time to write this
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Ah, that makes a lot of sense, then. I think what might help is to maybe read the story back to yourself once it's translated, and maybe see if a synonym might fit better than the translation? I'm not sure how you translated it, but what I do know is that words can lose some of the nuance and meaning, or sentence structures can become a little jumbled if it's a direct translation. That isn't necessarily your fault. What was the original story called?