So, this is what I would have done differently. I am an old Infocom player, Zork, Infidel, Witness, like that. It is better to have interactive playing and perhaps a more clarified objective. 

Your writing is good, the story is good, but it was all over the place as there seemed to be no objective. I like these kind of games but you need a parser and a clear goal.

Im lazy to read so as genre its not for me but it looks decent visually. So nice work for that. 👍

This is my first text based game ever played, felt some of these words.
Maybe adding some sketches of the locations and blurry people to deliver the scene in a better way.
Great work!!

Nice submit!
I am not usually in to text based games but I managed to sit trough this one and enjoyed it.
The atmosphere was nice and slightly spooky, Story was well written and game mechanics and page changes worked nicely.
I would have hoped for slightly sorter text's between the page turns because I tend to be a lazy reader but I think for someone who isnt as lazy its not a problem.

Overall a solid submit for the jam!

This was well written and it definitely made me feel. It felt a little too true to my introverted life though :D