I really liked the art style and the overall structure, but I couldn't tell why I was "choosing" anything, and it seemed all or most of the choices just led to the same outcomes. The choices also didn't feel like anything... i.e. I didn't feel good or bad about any of them, I always felt like I was picking randomly. I don't mind being a bit lost & confused at first, especially with this theme, but I feel like I need something compelling to keep me interested, and it never came. The bang on the door was a good start, but then it just felt like I was just going with the flow without any interest. The animation stuff was alright at the start but felt long & repetitive as it went along.
I think you're really talented and I hope to see more projects from you! Congrats on the submission!