This one is really someting. I can see you put a lot of effort in this and it is a lot of fun!
The opening was great and very creative, congratulations. The artwork is great as well
The mechanincs are good and work well, but i think they could be introduced in a easier way, it was too much to get just from that one screen and it took me some time to understand how to actually play.
Overall, its a great work, congratulations!