For continue your game jam about devlogs, you have 2 devlogs posted the last day, so I can't give you anything for consistency.
Looks like you've put a lot of time into this, but I'm not sure where your progress is this month. Starting with Goals and ending with one for progress would be great
Devlog clarity was great on the two devlogs you posted.
Content was readable on the background, gave a great amount of detail on what you worked on.
As far as the game goes, I am not your target audience for this genre, so I can't say much to that effect. It did crash in the browser (google chrome) but your page mentions that it should probably be downloaded.