An interesting game with a unique concept! Here are a couple of things I'd like to point out.
- The idea of playing across two screens turned out to be quite unique. However, I can also see why this approach isn't used very often: players risk becoming overwhelmed by having to track two separate states and essentially play two games at once. This isn't a particularly serious issue in the context of this game jam or this specific game, but if the developers decide to expand the project, I think this is something worth paying close attention to during playtesting. That said, I'm sure the developers are already well aware of this challenge.
- The music was loud enough that I had to turn my system volume all the way down. I'd love to see at least a simple master volume slider in future projects, even if implementing a full settings menu would take too much time. Alternatively, if this option is already available and I simply missed it, making it more visible would help players find it more easily.
Overall, this is a genuinely interesting and unique game for the jam, with beautiful visuals and a creative concept. The developer managed to surprise me in a good way!
Great job! =D ❤️