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this game is genuinely adorable bro omg i was expecting NOTHING at all for an fpe vn but the dialogue branches are actually huge (relative to my expectations) and i could tell they were written with love... literally always wanted an fpe vn but its all dating which usually means it sucks and is written poorly to be more fan service-y (i dont blame them idrk what u can do with fpe as a story) so this game subverts that expectation

for my first playthrough i befriended abbie then abruptly joined the oligang to see what happens but i had to stop playing to do smth and im actually excited to get back on and continue the story like bro i genuinely have never been excited to play a VISUAL NOVEL before of all games

not to mention the characterization is accurate?? about a 3 minute piece of media 2.5 years ago where the characters have no characterization?? like i bitch slapped zip at some point and she ran away like a bum not even saying anything to me which is so on character for her

sorry for the yap sesh i just really liked this game, i do wonder whats the average time spent to get every single ending

yakulite18 days ago (1 edit)

AHHHH this comment actually made my day thank you SO much!!!

to be completely honest most of the routes were me writing them and running on 3 hours of sleep so i was worried that the interactions may seem too rushed or too out of character :') im glad that you think of our game this way though!!

i wish you luck on the oligang route, however i feel there are still some bugs to it so im gonna have to ask you to be careful :^ praying that it goes well though!! Thank you again for your comment, and thank you for enjoying our game!

edit: OH yeah i don't have an average time to get every ending, but i have a feel that it's around 20-50mins+ since I know that the entire game could take up to hours to finish (IF you're doing the teacher route and the OC route) (i have to warn you though the teacher route is more shallow in writing compared to the other routes, since i was in a rush to finish the game and burnout was quickly getting to me, real sorry for that)

onceandonlyonce18 days ago

i finished the oligang route and ngl idk what i was expecting cuz i thought i could betray oliver at some point and come back to abbie but i guess not it was still fun tho

also do you mean 20-50 mins PER ending or just all the endings excluding teacher and oc route?

side note ik this has been commented already but i tried to kill claire on monday and like a few days later shes greeting me like nothing happeend which is really funny and ruined my immersion

yakulite18 days ago

hello!!

iirc, yes, per ending (if you actually want to read all the dialogue, if you skip through everything though then you know that it's gonna be rlly fast)

for the Claire thing I feel I just forgot the fact that she was supposed to die (I think?? Either you attempt to kill her or you actually do, I genuinely forgot it's been like a year or so since I've coded this) (since I coded everything in like different months so I might've forgotten) I'm real sorry for that though 😔😔one day I'll fix it when I'm not busy with schoolwork, it's much more harder for me to remember things since I'm the only coder/progammer in the team and prefer to work alone so again I'm really sorry

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