The story kept me hooked until the very end. I didn’t expect Jonah to be the one responsible, though I would’ve guessed it was some kind of anomaly in the form of a guardian entity. The colors really help set the mood, and the sound design genuinely gets you good! Overall, the story keeps you on edge while still giving you little moments to catch your breath. At one point, I even got some Half-Life vibes from the story.
I would’ve loved for the story to be a bit longer, but I know from personal experience how much work goes into building the atmosphere, while still leaving enough time to actually develop the story itself. Good luck with your future projects!