I like that you used Indian music. I think the track is repetitive in a way that kind of detracts and lacks development.
The ostinato is good, however. So, like it's a good little tune that just needs to be developed with more going on.
Some of the synths aren't landing quite right timing wise. Are they in line with Indian tuning systems?
I've heard some Indian classical music, and there's a lot of microtonal stuff I enjoy, but I'm thinking there might be more to develop here.
This is a neat idea though, good work! :)