Hi all! I've opened the first playtest of Ezekiel, a story-driven dark-fantasy RPG made in RPG Maker MZ.
The Church says Ezekiel's sister is dead. Her records say she was moved eight days after her burial. It's a slow-burn mystery about grief and a paper trail that shouldn't exist.
Page: https://slebbeshotmailcom.itch.io/ezekiel-beta-v1
Windows, free, about 5–7 hours (estimate). You don't need to finish it, and any amount of play helps.
What I'd most like feedback on:
- Pacing: where it drags or feels repetitive.
- Clarity: whether you always knew where to go and what to do next.
- Combat: whether the turn-based battles make sense without a big tutorial.
- Bugs: anything that crashed, got you stuck or looked wrong.
There's a short, optional feedback form (3–5 minutes) linked on the page, or you can just reply here.
Content note: death, grief, violence, illness.
I'm happy to return the favour and play your project too.