I was confused at first where to go in the end, until I found the path leading left. That was a dramatic ending, would be cool to see the story further developed.
hahaha. well you could add an update with the new version after and people can choose for the intense version? might I ask what you had added that you removed?
I only deleted and modified. I changed the text to make it more moderate, and I also made the ending calmer, and so on. In fact, despite the “harshness” of my first version, I like it better.
