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Wow, I really love how you used sketches to create such a wonderful mood. I think it’s both effective and creative. Character expression are sooo good! I also really love how polished the dialogue and UI are. And the autumn theme comes through so clearly
The hand drawn art was unique and the vocals at the end was beautiful. A few critiques: some kind of transition from gameplay music to the vocals would make it feel less jarring when it happens. And for the story, less filler talk and more substance would have made the story more impactful imo. That being said, great job on getting a game submitted to the jam!
I'll be sure to keep that in mind when we make another game! I really appreciate the critiques, since it lets my team and I, learn what we should've done better. I'm glad you liked the vocals at the end aswell! Thanks for playing our game :3!
Not a big VN guy but I loved the art and music!
Thank you, Very much!
The art style, with all the paper collage, really fitted the autumn vibe and visual novel gameplay (also using the Mr. White and Pumpkin as heads did make me laugh lol). Even tho it was a bit repetitive, the music was nice to hear and made the overhaul game feel very chill and cozy. And the end, oh god, the moment he blinked I knew what was going to happen and even it felt like a punch. The singing at the end was a bit loud, but it was shocking and very pleasant to hear.
However, something that felt missing is some gameplay to break the continuous reading and dialogue of the game, even tho it is a visual novel, having some interactivity, like choosing dialog options (even if they don’t change the outcome of the history), would be very welcomed.
Hello! Thank you for giving us a tip! My team and I are beginners who are new to game development, except for Mango, who has some coding experience. We also rushed the story a bit, but next time, when we release a full game, my team and I will make sure to polish the story alongside the game itself. Thank you so much for taking the time to play our game and give us a rating! ^ ^
I know you were rushed, but for what it's worth I really liked the drawings of the characters :)
Thank you! very much for giving us a rate! ^ ^
The song at the end kinda shocked me, but the voice is very sweet. honestly the writing is super nice!! The art and the backgrounds goes so well together, and the UI looks super autumn-ey too. Fits the theme!! I did get confused, but when I played the second time I did understand things better. Good job!!
Thank you so much for playing our game! The singer is actually quite shy about singing, and I was the one who suggested having her as the main singer. We were supposed to add a ukulele to the song, but she said, “I’m a beginner at playing the ukulele.”
Why so rushed lolz XD
bat kaya hmph! (jk ik we all was bz bz)
I wonder ano kaya problema hmm
ask the writers bro
weren't you the writer?
Sadly to say, i do not think this type of game fits the limitation. I would say apart from the girl singing at the end, the audio is a bit laking and doesn't reflect the story you are trying to tell.
PD: I really liked the claps XD
Sorry you felt that way! And I do agree that the audio was a bit lacking (apologies on my part [my team schedule's were all conflicting so we couldn't really find stuff that would fit]). Still! I appreciate you playing our game (specially the clap parts!).
I feel the autumn vibes, but unfortunately the story, which is the main thing of this game, didn't really do it for me. I think you could've detailed out the scenes a little more. It felt quite rushed.
But the bittersweet ending was a nice touch!
Thanks for the feedback!The story was indeed rushed, but I really appreciate you taking the time to play and share your thoughts!