Was a really interesting idea! It's impressive you managed to pull through 20-25 min narrative tale for a gamejam! Amazing work.
There were some points, where the dialogue that was being spoken and the subtitles were not the same, and especially as some one who does not speak the language, it confused me quite a bit.
Also maybe it was just my gear, but the Italian audio almost had a weird metallic/robotic scrunch to it (maybe its some post processing effect that you have applied on it) which made it slightly harder to listen to it, while the English audio was pretty good.
Overall amazing work,and I learnt about someone new in this game! Great tribute