I really enjoyed the game! The artwork and music is great. The beginning is a banger. It creates so much suspense from the get go, and it made me invested in the story immediately. The contrast of the peaceful garden tending right after is a good transition. However, I feel like adding some references linking back to the initial scene can help a lot with pacing and make this relatively slow section more interesting. For example, the apprentice presumably does not know the hanging and Rosemonde's character, this gap between character and player can create some interesting dramatic irony. Overall, I think the story has great potential, and I look forward for future updates!