Heyya! My partner was the one who played your game and he wanted me to post his comments about the game on his behalf. Here are some of his thoughts:
- "Cool features like the transcribe"
- "A bit too much handrails, guide the player to the actions instead of telling them what specific actions to take"
- "Skip text, and don't wait for the speech to complete"
As for me, I found the act of sweeping the leaves relaxing (ㅅ´ ˘ `)
I think it's admirable that you are sharing Giuseppe Ungaretti's poetry. My fave poem is Vigil (which was featured in the game, I believe)