I really liked the bold chromatic chord progressions in this like other people have said. My main critique was that the overall sound was a bit "thin" and distant. Maybe that was your aim. Good work, esp for 3 hours!
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Thanks for the reply! That's exactly the feel I was going for. I think the result was a little too weak, though. The thin sound was definitely from the weaker bass. Boosting bass left me with this harsh thumping sound I didn't want, and reducing it left it too weak. The problem is definitely in the arrangement - probably the simplicity of it. Someone else mentioned this, but next time I'll add another instrument in the bass and change some of the harmonies to help spread the sounds.