OK! Now THIS IS A STORY!
Truly you guys should be proud, from the writing, to the music and sound design, to the artwork this is literally in my humble opinion a MASTERPIECE!
Yes that's a tad over embellished but truly this is honestly a beautiful piece of work.
I have only 1 teeny tiny thing... Lucan's line:
"WHAT! NO father please I can make you up. I have been bad, please forgive me."
I assume/read it as "WHAT! NO father please I can make it up to you. I have been bad, please forgive me."
I don't know if that was the envisioned meaning but thats what made the most sense to me given the circumstances.
But for the first time... I have no other input truly, this was amazing. 10/10 would read all over again 🩵🩵 AMAZING JOB!