hmm so many character changing pov, and the narrative in third person make this story confusing. The journal is also written is not in Dominic perspective kinda messed which character who wrote the Journal, like in the beginning, i thought it was Dean wrote the journal but it's Dominic wrote it ofc. And is Dominic use He/Them/They pronounce? Imo it's not very suitable with narrative third person, make another confusion with referring 2 ppl or more. The story is interesting, that for sure.