Read this through to an ending in about seven pages, then opened the gallery and found four I had not seen. That is the right length for a jam and the right reason to go back in. The prose is what held me: 'you had forgotten how much', and an arrow under the shoulder scale 'like a sentence no one finished'. Two honest notes. I drove it with scripted clicks rather than a hand, so weigh that. And while choosing I could not tell what a choice had changed until after it landed. Hand-built engine, first game, and the text reads clean. That part is not luck.