Very cool, I love the concept and it's very Paper's Please-y. The atmosphere and the visuals really sell it, as well as the polish you've done. My god these guys need to switch to digital records, and stop leaving delicious cakes on the ground. I think if I was going to suggest improvements, I'd maybe see if you could encode data into the data you get on the screen, like their ID number, etc, make it so observant players can make that connection and save themselves a printout.