Really good art and music.
I was actually thinking of also creating a vn about this fairytale sometime, so it's nice seeing this.
I think 'rosie' was a bit too dark compared to the others (not sure if that was intended).
Now I did enjoy this, and I think what I've seen was good, despite the rather quick start from outsider to kings 'champion' for not a very good reason. However, and this is purely subjective opinion, I disagree with other people saying that the initial scene makes me interested in the story. I acknowledge that the initial scene was good, but I personally don't like time skips, it ruins immersion, it dissociates me with the characters, oftentimes it also spoils the story (spoiler). After seeing the opening scene I was interested in what happens next, not what happened before, as I had no investment in the characters, only the situation described before me.
Still you did a great job.