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1) What reason? Was it meant to be - "The door was locked for a reason" maybe?

2) Shipping? And the rest is very confusing. 

3) His Pen was Newspaper? What is the original and where's "software error on screen" comes from, what is it about.

4) Companion doesn't sound quite right  considering MC is just responsibility and a stranger? He's dead? Maybe something like "absent" will make more sense. 

5) What is "It's" and what surface?

6)"Don't bother" or "Don't bother trying" will sound better in the situation .

(Here's just major stuff.  Even though i can understand general idea - i was very confused  at times.  I will see if i can hunt anything else for you later. Hope this helps!)