This was really well-written and I think the only character I didn't like was Diego. Not one of them could be considered the "bad guy" and yet there were no "good" guys, either. I sympathized with all of them, and I think the subject you chose was an extremely relevant one for what is going on with technology. The art style was really good. And I loved the way the story jumped around to give more context to what was happening. I think if you come back to this, it just needs a little more time between the dramatic events so that the disturbing direction can be built up a bit more. But yeah, this was incredibly solid and you did a good job.