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Marching On's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Mix/Production | #52 | 2.315 | 2.500 |
| Theme | #56 | 2.006 | 2.167 |
| Songwriting/Melody | #56 | 1.955 | 2.111 |
| Overall | #56 | 2.092 | 2.259 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your song embody the theme "fight or flight"?
with this piece I imagined an army marching on the battlefield seeing another army and continuing to march on. "flight" as in choosing not to fight.
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if you keep working on this sound you're gonna come up with some insane ideas great job
thank you!
I think the guitar is slightly off-beat (which doesn’t sound intentional), and I feel a military march should sound more intense, but otherwise it’s a solid groove!
thank you for the feedback. yes I think it sounds that way because I used a midi sequencer with an multi-track recorder but my setup lacks a way to cue the sequencer to the recorder.
The groove was funky, but a bit too unorganized. The rhythm felt choppy and jittery. I liked the sounds you chose though.
thank you for the feedback!
It's a bit short, sounds like someone getting ready for flight.
Musically it is not a march if that is what you were going for 🤔
There is also something a bit messy in the arrangement/composition. Sry can't quite articulate what exactly.
The groove is funky though, I like it 😁
yeah, with my current setup the timing ended up being off by a bit. something I need improve on. thank you for the feedback.