Great story, great game! My one complaint is that my choices don't often feel super impactful? There's realistically only two or three instances where the decision I make really matters to the outcome of the story, and often only one of those two choices actually leads to the story being continued (and the other one just leads to an immediate ending). The lockpicking sections are definitely a cool addition! There were also a lot of grammar and spelling errors, but to be honest, I think that kind of contributed to the casual, silly vibe of the game, so that's not necessarily a bad thing! Aside from it being a bit linear, I think this is a great game.