you sure know how to not lose a reader in the first ten minutes, great and direct introduction.
I'm glad that I never really tried (before???) to become a known artist online. An art style really is so recognisable. I've worried about this genre of topic a lot -- the way people treat you when they know you're 'an artist' is unfortunate, somehow. Other people in these comments will put it better. Even now, I sometimes see people coveting wishing they 'had an artist', and my gut reaction is not joy at being wanted but wariness over the unsubtle 'desire to have'.
I need to go brushg my fucking teeth. I had to mute the kissing sounds. You sure know how to disgust a reader. (positive)
I have read one of your vns before this, maybe like, four years ago, I don't know. I liked the first of yours I've read, and I briefly talked to you about this a little bit a few months ago -- but after reading this one, I feel like your character writing has improved. The introduction, ending, phone calls, dissociative internal dialogue and scenes (really loved both anita and anita! your name is green! youre the greenest person ever), flickering expressions and subtle timings, actions told mostly through foley, and Sunny's selfless selfishness and self-justification all came through strongly for me.
If I had to complain about anything, it would just be that the story went how I was expecting.
For a more characteristically LOVEYOUSMILEHAPPYFOREVER review:
"How will your traumatized fans feel if they saw ya turning their experiences into fetish fuel?" GOOD!! GOOD!!!!!!!!!! I FEEL GOOD!!! Hahahaaa haaaaaaa haahahaaa haaaahahahahaha myuahahahaa muhahahaha muyahaha muahahahaha!!! HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!