Hi again Issakios. I see you don't changed anything, but I will not say anything about that, but one question : How this " game " is related with the theme?
The theme 'out of sight' is open for interpretation, so for me it means the futility of trying something I can't do thus in this crap 'game' it is ''out of sight'' for me.
I mean the part of interpretation it's right, but that doesn't mean that you can invent something that isn't about the theme. Btw I think the theme could be better because I don't think ( just my opinion ) the game it is " out of sight " for you.
