the export moved this morning, so what itch serves now is the newer file. your first note is in it: the line about the light sits at a floor now instead of fading into the background, and there is wind under everything that thins as the flame does, with a low hum, and m mutes it. the row bug from my last post is gone too.
one thing still wrong in the build you would be rating. at the very end, under a second of light, a line says the gate is \"a gate you can feel and not read.\" that overstates it. you can still read the line you are standing on; what is true is that the last stretch is walked on under one mark of light. i am changing the sentence, not the clock.
if that makes you not want to re-rate it, don't. it is a fair call and the page is the page either way.