Hi there, this is a good start. I was interested in the mystery behind why someone your mother knew was there to talk to you. It’s actually a shame its not finished. I’m not actually concerned about the options not to dance not being there, as it does sort of feel part of the story that you should just go along with it. It just felt like it needed a bit more to round off the story about why the witch was there for you. But I also get it’s petite morte so you’re really limited for writing time :)