heya! tysm for taking the time and playing through my game, it's very appreciated.
i definitely understand some of your criticisms, especially regarding the pacing and UI. however, the story is intended to be a slower-paced, character-driven psychological horror VN, and vega's excessive internal monologue is a deliberate part of his characterization. however, i understand that it won't be everyone's cup of tea. some of your critiques are disproven as well (vega says he's in his early 20s in the intro and everyone else is similarly a young adult, the band is a group of friends playing together for fun, they didn't want to practice when someone wasn't there, etc.).
regardless, i'll definitely keep your suggestions in mind as i continue development, especially the rhythm minigame timing and UI improvements. i'm glad you enjoyed the experience overall, and thank you again for giving my game a chance!