I'm getting 90's console vibes from your piece, like I've just turned on my old PS1.
I would love to try and analyze your composition a little deeper, but you are not really giving us a lot to judge your work. In these kinds of jam, it's super helpful to get some details regarding the context of your track (what kind of game you imagine it's for, what your ideas were and how you realized those...). As it stands, this is music for some mini game - and it can totally work for that, depending on what kind of game it is and how that is supposed to look and feel.
But I'm confident, that you'll make it easier for us to give proper feedback and evaluate your work with the next jam ;)