Thanks so much for checking it out; it means a lot! Haha yeah, I totally agree with your feedback. I focused too much on trying to get all of the silly lyrics in there, and all of the better jamming and effects were at the end- lessons learned! It was my first time ever trying to edit a video so it was fun to try out the effects.
If you have any interest, the full unedited 30-minute jam is on my YouTube as well, along with a bunch of other rough, loose jam original songs if you're into that at all! Thanks again!