I am not a player of pure narrative games, so please take the following with a grain of salt.
First and foremost, the game looks wonderful. I love the art style and look of the game, it definitely has a charm to it. It took me a while (toward the final scene with the officers in fact) to understand what is going on, but I think after that it's possible for me to puzzle out what was happening in the parts before. The part that confuses me the most would probably be the first scene, showing two people tied up in a cell/room, and it makes me wonder if the protagonist is the one looking at the two people, of is one of the two people instead. Being the core of the game, the narrative is quite decent, and I think you've done a fantastic job of turning a current event into an inspiration for a game. Well done!
Other things I like:
- The effect in the last scene looks cool
- The ability to read previous content is a nice touch
- Music is great
- I love how the text is shown on screen, with a good pacing perfect for reading lots of text in a game
Suggestions:
- I think the integration scene can be expanded, as I feel like that should be the core of the game. It currently ends really abruptly and it feels a bit incomplete right now
- Auto-scrolling would be helpful