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Finally got every ending, I'm embarrassed that I hadn't thought to click on her head a ton to get the B ending. 

Review below, minor spoilers: 

Overall, I like the game. I both relate to and feel for Momo, it's not easy to make a character like her work in such a short period of time. The clicker portion, and I mean this in the best way possible, I absolutely hated. I felt so mean mistreating her. So again, great job with the emotional aspect. 

Technically speaking, the game's systems are lackluster, not having any settings, no save feature, not giving a way to accelerate parts that have already been played, and a handful of visual bugs (including the black dot I mentioned previously). 

Content-wise, I like the visual style, it's simple but conveys most of what it needs to, there were a couple of confusing visuals that I mentioned before (her face and suit were the main points thereof). 

The writing was good for the most part, save for the occasional grammar issues. 

The game would definitely benefit from slower pacing in regards to the mental health aspect, and I agree with UNDERGOON in the sense that the horror elements, especially with the B ending, feel too cheap and in your face for the topic. 

The eye-thing's speech in particular didn't feel as impactful as it should have. It was trying too hard to be evil. Something brief and dismissive would've had a sharper sting to it than layering numerous sentences on top of each other. 

That being said, the commentary that the game makes on how characters in pornographic content are viewed and treated (which DottingGames offered an excellent analysis on) is a rare and interesting subversion of expectations that I personally wish to see more of.

I look forward to seeing your development skills improve over time, your future works, and potential future installations in this series!