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this reads as very AI... half of it is nonsense and robotic 

Hi, thank you for the honest feedback — I hear you. I'm a solo dev and I do use AI tools in my process, which is disclosed on this page, but the writing should never feel robotic, and if half of it read as nonsense to you, that is on me, not on the tools. I am doing a full revision pass on the script now to fix exactly that. If you give it another look after the update, I would genuinely value hearing whether it lands better. — Noctiloom

The revision I mentioned is now live — v1.1 is up on both the full and free pages. If you do take another look, I would still value hearing whether it lands better. Thank you again for saying it straight. — Noctiloom